We have received feedback on our 1st episode for or web series 'lines'
Here is a list of the peer feedback we received from the class:
- Sound levels need improving (some bits louder than others)(Mentioned 5 times)
- CD films logo to long (Mentioned 4 times)
- Credits are to fast at the end (Mentioned 3 times)
- Poor acting
- Opening sequence is to repetitive
- Editing of the video is good & works well
- Nice logos, they look well made and effective to the audience
- Poorly recorded narration
- Inappropriate music used throughout the video (including the opening sequence)
- Camera work could be better
- Too many cuts
- Script is too basic
- Poor cuts used
- Poorly planned
- The actors need auditions before acting in next video as they don't seem very confident in the first episode (Mentioned 3 times)
- Catchy song works well (Mentioned 3 times)
- The stereotypes are not clearly shown in the 1st episode
- Need more close ups
- Need more core content
- Visual gags of skeleton work well
- Need more comedy rather than drama to make it more comedic
- Continuity issues need improving (Mentioned 3 times)
Here is the feedback we received from Pete (Teacher):
- When the character is holding the polos, there could of been a close up
- While I was watching the 1st episode, it felt as if I was in a theater, there needs to be more use of close ups and shot changes
- Voice over explaining each character works well, needs to be more narration
- Cut to show different characters
- More planning is needed prior to next shoot (rehearsals etc) to avoid bad acting
- High angle show works well, but panning shot doesn't work within the same shot
- Sound levels need improving / editing
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