Feedback on episode 2

In todays session we have received peer & teacher feedback on our 2nd episode of 'Lines'.

Peer feedback

• A couple of interesting shots
• Strange narrative, cannot understand it (7 People mentioned this)
• Cuts well
• Characters work well
• Sound levels are high & low (5 people mentioned this)
• Taster bit / preview works well (3 people mentioned this)
• Too much in one content in one episode (2 people mentioned this)
• Good angles used
• Jumps too much
• Pointless shots used
• Confusing genre (comedy or drama?)
• Acting is not very good, could be better
• Spy could of been done better, e.g appears in the room like is the skeleton
• Silent moments ned sorting out
• Need quicker cuts
• Continuity works well
• 'Jaws' sound / music cuts in too suddenly & drops out to early

Teacher feedback (Pete)

• Continuity with previous episode (costume, scripting) works well
• Elliot's character has been developed well
• Use of jaws music?
• Suddenly goes silent
• Much better editing than the 1st episode
• Add footage, where it goes black / silent?
• Like the taster for episode 3 at the end